I posted this image in the Vale Media group on flickr. Some fellow students as well as one of my teachers have commented on it with some constructive feedback that have allowed me to understand how to improve. They have allowed me to be aware of what I must do in order to make my photography work in future, when I do my practical unit.
The first comment from Ella has allowed me to understand that my image would maybe work better if I had more of a foreground and background. The other comments are all very similar in that they are telling me that I am missing a clear subject/ focus, making it not work as well as it could. The end comment has given some very constructive feedback for me as I like the idea of making the tree the focus by using Elements to add more contrast and colour to it. From these comments, I now know that in future when I do my practical unit, I must make sure that there is a clear subject in every picture I take. I think I would still use this image, but I would definately manipulate it in Elements beforehand.
They also commented some constructive critisism on this picture that I posted:
I found this comment from my teacher very helpful because I was able to completely understand what she meant. I agree fully because when I tried doing what she said I did find that I was drawn to the light, which isn't what I want from the image. I would maybe re take the picture without the light in it which would improve it a lot I feel. Also, I would definately straighten the window in Elements if I was to use this picture for anything.
This has helped me understand that in future when doing my parctical unit, I must make sure there are no lights that are over exposed so that nothing distracts my image from its focus.
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